User talk:Itsamadmadmadmadmax/sandbox

Feedback on Draft
Ready to move to mainspace.

Great job! Your draft is very well-researched and adds significant new content to the page on Fina Torres. Great job adding categories, too!

You can go ahead and move your additions to the existing page, no more than one paragraph at a time. There are only small things that I would recommend to make the page even better: move the citation numbers to the right of the period; go through and copyedit carefully-there are a few places where commas are missing; and see if you can fix the red error at the bottom that reads “DEFAULTSORT:Torres, Fina.” Great work, overall!

Chronophoto (talk) 02:36, 22 February 2016 (UTC)