User talk:Itsjacquie

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Hello, Itsjacquie, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Notes on Wiki draft
Hi Jacquie,

I think this looks good so far and appreciate that you've found some additional sources to flesh out the original entry. I think you can add a little more detail about some of the things you mention (for example: is there any indication in the sources about why/how the bakuto formed? Also, you say that their trade was robin-hood like, but it sounds like the stole back earning from laborers to give to the government (which is the opposite of Robin Hood), so I wonder if you could flesh out that point?)

I think you could be a bit more descriptive (one or two sentences in each case) about some of the specific aspects of their history and their conceptualization in popular culture and still stay well within Wikipedia's guidelines for clear, direct information.

Adovevie (talk) 15:34, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Assistance with new article
Hi, a group of us are endeavoring to create a new Gangster film article to replace the current Mob film, which is limited largely to American Mafia films. If you are so inclined, please feel free to lend a hand, either with content or feedback. Thanks again :-) Informata ob Iniquitatum (talk) 00:33, 28 June 2017 (UTC)