User talk:Itsjaime/Sonya Kelliher-Combs/Bibliography

After having looked at your work, you did a really great job providing cohesive information of your artist. However, I feel that the subtitles "Personal" and "Education" are intertwined. What I mean is that in the personal section, you mentioned her studies and the schools she went to which can be arguably placed under the education section. Under the personal section, I would recommend trying to omit anything that has to do with education and to try to include more about her childhood, family, and upbringing. Furthermore, you mentioned the three artworks that Sonya Kelliher Combs has created but didn't state her purpose or meaning behind doing so. Rather than only providing the dimensions and the material it is made of, I would suggest researching further to find the story behind each of those art works. For my article, I couldn't find any written form of explanation for the artworks, but I found her explanation through a Youtube video. So I suggest trying to find a documentary, podcast, or video in which your artist is explaining her piece of work. In regards to your references, I recommend adding citations after your sentences, so that we know where you got the information from. For your "References" tab, instead of putting down the website, you can create a citation during your edit phase which can be found in the top left corner noted as "Cite". This can be useful in reorganizing your article and establishing credibility to what you wrote down. Overall, you did a great job providing key information about your artist, but just work on context and citation. Best regards, Lucky Nguyen.