User talk:Izaahd/Mujeres Creando

Peer Review Feedback
I felt that your draft for Wikipedia was well-balanced and contained specific and useful information. It definitely contains good structure and layout; each section is clearly labeled and has a good amount of information regarding the topic. I also felt that your bibliography and ability to reference were very strong. One thing I personally would suggest is adjusting the structure and incorporating a section for an introduction to your topic, Mujeres Creando. Due to the fact that there is no background section or heading and it jumps right into politics, I think it would make it much clearer for your audience if you specified the group or organization so the audience knows what exactly you are talking about, almost like an introduction and background section for your topic. Otherwise, this is looking great so far. Great work. Alexiawosene (talk) 07:48, 30 November 2023 (UTC)

The writing provides a compelling starting statement with titles and objectives for primary tasks and objectives. It has a solid structure with two sections, focusing on a single occurrence and providing background information. The sources are trustworthy, but it would be beneficial to include more diverse sources, such as news stories, to provide a more thorough understanding. The language is clear and the grammar is in order, but the title's style is difficult to understand. The title's style is difficult to understand, but the language is clear. The final piece of advice is to include diverse sources and images and double-check any prejudiced terminology. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Karov03 (talk • contribs) 03:14, 6 December 2023 (UTC)