User talk:JAP09940/Group Project

Raven's Peer Review
The introduction is clear and concise. I have a good idea of what aspects are important and where the article is going to take me. The intro is missing citations, but once a reliable source is added I think it will be a strong section. There are a good amount of headings with somewhat large blocks of text following. The content is separated into different paragraphs, but maybe consider adding subheadings to break up some of that information. That could help give a more clear and structured look to your article. Overall, your article has a neutral tone and many sources. I see in the sandbox you have links to some images. I think adding those would help balance your article and give it a better look.