User talk:JAwestscholar/sandbox

Good day JAwestscholar, Your edited article is good; however, it could use a few changes. I will first speak on the overall article and then get into sections afterwards.

Firstly, you can make the superscripts appear before the full stop, instead of after. This follows the Wikipedia format in the tutorials.

Your sources also seem to be mostly blogged posts and self-published articles. Maybe try seeking more scholarly sources to corroborate the ideas.

There are also a few grammatical and punctuation errors within the edit which could be addressed.

Gender Theory in ‘Anancy an Ticks’, ‘Anancy an Smoke-pork’ and ‘Bra Nancy and Tiger’
There is a disconnect in the two paragraphs under this title. Maybe something could be stated which connects Miss Lou’s outlook of preserving Jamaican literary and linguistic culture to the development of the character, Anancy.

Background on language
The article makes claims on behalf of unnamed groups of people in the line “She was called a ‘living language’ and a ‘culture icon’ by most Jamaicans." This could be adjusted.

Deception
The themes could be built on a bit more. The deception theme only had one sentence, and could have also used a source to corroborate the information.

Gender Theory and Language
Greater context could be given on the identity of the “woman” in the analysis. A scholarly source or two could also be used to corroborate these ideas. The section also ends a bit abruptly.

Tbanonymous (talk) 05:22, 29 March 2021 (UTC)