User talk:JBujko/sandbox

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Feedback
Nice work on your draft. Some feedback
 * Formatting matters. Only the article title should be bolded, not the section headers. Make sure that the section headers are real, not just bolded text like the "Protective tissues" subheader.
 * You need a lead section. The lead section should summarize all the major points in the article without including information that's not in the body of the article.
 * References should appear immediately after the statements they support. There should be a minimum of one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn’t be any text after the last reference in a paragraph. They also shouldn't be in the section headers. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:49, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

I think you are the only group who has not moved into mainspace. Someone is going start reviewing what is already there. MMBiology (talk) 21:22, 10 April 2018 (UTC)