User talk:JEby1/False pleasure

Your edits do a great job of explaining what a false pleasure is without the risk of plagiarism/copyright infraction. One suggestion for the lead section edit you created is to explicitly state how the relationship example counts as a false pleasure example. The general reader might not understand the distinction if they aren't accustomed to reading philosophic writing.

For the added content section, you should expand on the two ways Plato defines false pleasure. Writing one sentence about each definition might not explain the concept fully. Try to come up with an example, similar to the one in the first section. Your edits should be a great addition to this article!Stewartjordan625 (talk) 22:56, 27 February 2020 (UTC)