User talk:JGiv04/sandbox

Hey Jessica!

I think the few sentences you constructed to add to the Wikipedia article “Gender Variance” seem to add some great further information on the topic. Addressing the gender differences in this topic is crucial when confronting the problem of gender stereotyping material items, such as clothing. My only suggestion would be to perhaps consider reconstructing the first two sentences so that there are not as many breaks and commas but besides that great work!

Emsager190 (talk) 21:55, 12 December 2018 (UTC)