User talk:JGruenwald456

Your submission at Articles for creation: Journal of Technological and Space Plasmas (January 5)
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Dennis Brown - 2&cent; 11:15, 5 January 2024 (UTC)

Citing sources
You might give that a glance. Using external links is ok for somethings, but articles require inline citations for each of the important claims. That is pretty universal here. Yes, it's a bit of work, but the goal of the encyclopedia is to be verifiable, and that is more important than being complete. There is a link above for the Teahouse, which is a great place to get help. At first glance, there seems to be a decent chance the article can be salvaged, but it takes a little effort, like any other article. Dennis Brown - 2&cent; 11:57, 5 January 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi Dennis,
 * thanks for your help and feedback (I highly appreciate it because this is my first Wiki article :)) - I based my article on others on Wiki from plasma physics journals (for example, these two: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Physics_of_Plasmas and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plasma_Sources_Science_and_Technology) - They also have no external references but I will do my best to add some.
 * I thought to add some in this manner: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plasma_Physics_and_Controlled_Fusion
 * would that be OK?
 * thanks again
 * Johannes JGruenwald456 (talk) 12:03, 5 January 2024 (UTC)

That article is a bit thin on content, but the key is using inline citation. Also, if you are getting info from a different website, do NOT directly copy the text. That is copyright infringement and a huge no-no here. You need to summarize the contents in your own words. We actually have bots that check and catch that, as well as humans. Again, the Teahouse is the best place to get help. I'm an admin here, which means I clean up and point people to the best places to get help when they need it, and other ugly but needed things. They are better equipped to help you. Dennis Brown - 2&cent; 12:10, 5 January 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Journal of Technological and Space Plasmas (January 9)
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Randykitty (talk) 09:45, 9 January 2024 (UTC)