User talk:JIS130

Nomination of Southern Halo (band) for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Southern Halo (band) is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Southern Halo (band) until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding to your message. (talk to me) (contributions) @ 16:35, 24 September 2015 (UTC)

Please review the Manual of Style
Greetings! Thank you for your work on Southern Halo (band). I appreciate your adding sources and information to the article. However, some of your edits are not compliant stylistically with Wikipedia's Manual of Style. Two situations in particular have come up: It can be tricky to sort it all out, but remember that Wikipedia is collaborative, so there are other editors willing to help. All I ask is, if they've made an improvement and noted that it's to comply with the Manual of Style, please don't undo the change. —C.Fred (talk) 18:39, 24 September 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Every article starts with an introduction (or lede) section that defines the subject. Your edits have removed that section and relabeled it as Background.
 * 2) Unless there is a proper noun or title of a work in the section heading, only the first word of a section heading is capitalized. Thus, "Television Appearances" is not correctly capitalized; "Television appearances" would be correct, as would "Appearances on The Tonight Show and other programs".

Thank you so so much for your help and guidance. You are a pleasure to deal with and I appreciate that so much. I apologize for undoing your fixes. I actually thought that I didn't save the page and didn't realize you were making edits. My apologies again!