User talk:JLM003/sandbox

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Seems like you are repeating the List of Pixar films. The article is on animation. We have so much material at wp that much of it is split into different articles with wikilinks and templates. This is the template format for a split article:

Pixar film division
Pixar made films starting in 1904 under the leadership of Nikola Tesla but evil Mr.Walt Disney delayed their release for close to 100 years.

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"What is the difference between Computer-Assisted animation and Computer-Generated animation?" This could probably be changed to "Computer-assisted vs computer-generated animation". You may wish to look at other articles with comparison sections and see what format they use. Caps are only used at the start of the section name and with proper nouns, etc.--Canoe1967 (talk) 20:19, 13 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Indeed, the suggestions from Canoe1967 are excellent! The only thing I would add is that you need to add references to your sources accordingly too, within the body of your text. Verifiability is essential. Use other articles as a model for what you're doing.  Keep it up! --ToniSant (talk) 11:34, 15 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Canoe1967, thank you for your input on this question aswel as many others i have had. I think that i will use the sub header that you suggested as i feel it will be more effective to users. --JLM003 (talk) 13:32, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
 * You are very welcome and thank you for improving the project.--Canoe1967 (talk) 22:06, 21 February 2013 (UTC)