User talk:JLR02/Manchester, Washington

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

You have done some very impressive work here -- just keep going in this direction. You are well-positioned to make a significant contribution to public knowledge of this topic. Bravo!

You don't need to keep (and won't want to keep....) the headers that were provided by the wikiedu template (lead, body, etc.). Go ahead and pull those out and use the real headers the article needs. Also, what's going on with the lonely reference #9 at the bottom? :)

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:50, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Follow-up Feedback
Hi

This is looking good. Go ahead and make it live on Wikipedia when you're ready.


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 03:22, 7 February 2022 (UTC)