User talk:JLRedperson/HP BTO Software

I have created this article at: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JLRedperson/HP_BTO_Software that I would like to receive comments on and suggestions for improvement. Full disclosure: I work for HP, however, I am a journalist by my academic background and wrote this article as a neutral, objective submission. The idea being to state the name of the product and what it does—with no hype or advertising. This is similar to Microsoft’s page that list MS Excel as a spreadsheet-application written and distributed by Microsoft for Microsoft Windows and Mac OS X. It features calculation, graphing tools, pivot tables and a macro programming language called VBA (Visual Basic for Applications).

The goal of creating this article to add to the quality and quantity of information about computing technology on Wikipedia and to include information on HP Software. Because HP bought several enterprise software companies during the past four years, this article attempts to help classify the portfolio to aid Wikipedia readers.

I welcome all comments and suggestions for improvement JLRedperson (talk) 00:52, 16 October 2009 (UTC)