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AfC notification: Draft:Oxidized LDL has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Oxidized LDL. Thanks! Catrìona (talk) 20:25, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the suggestion. I agree, that merging “oxidized LDL” into “low-density lipoprotein” would seem logical. It is known, however, that oxidized LDL is not only a part of the mechanism explaining atherogenicity of LDL, but also recognized as an independent risk factor, which appears to be implicated in pathophysiological conditions where native (unoxidized) LDL appears to have no role. Partly because of this, oxidized LDL has remained as one of the big topics in biomedical research for more than twenty years. In Google “oxidized LDL” gets over 2.3 million hits. These facts would support for “oxidized LDL” an independent appearance in Wikipedia.

AfC notification: Draft:Oxidized LDL has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Oxidized LDL. Thanks! -- RoySmith (talk) 21:26, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

The in-line citations have been corrected as suggested. Are these ok now?

Your submission at Articles for creation: Oxidized LDL (November 4)
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&mdash; Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 20:35, 4 November 2018 (UTC)