User talk:JMwangi98/sandbox

I think it's worth adding external links to your page. Some words where I thought this could be useful: Grammatical edits: Content edits: Opt1cs 16:44, 30 March 2018 (UTC)
 * ketone
 * acetoacetate, beta-hydroxybutyrate, acetone
 * macronutrient
 * ketogenic diets
 * ketosis
 * beta-ketothialase
 * Krebs cycle
 * ATP
 * lipolytic (to lipolysis)
 * "Naturally"- do you mean it occurs naturally or is this a comment, because it's not the kind of phrase you would see in an encyclopedia
 * "BHB can be converted to acetoacetic acid; and it is this acetoacetic acid" - make two separate sentences/combine to one
 * Notation of BHB is changed multiple times- the first time you say "beta-hydroxybutyrate", possibly add the other two notations in parentheses for ease of understanding
 * "Produced in the mitochondria of liver cells, acetoacetate is formed by" - re-word to remove comma and make it sound more formal, ex "Acetoaetate is produced in the mitochondria of liver cells by..."
 * "several effects [4]. These effects" - edit to "several effects, ranging from..."
 * "On the other hand"- not a phrase that is usually used in encyclopedias
 * The sentence: " ß-hydroxybutyrate is technically not a ketone due reduced molecule resulting in a hydroxyl group on the first carbon"- maybe this would be more useful if it were near a picture. Alternatively, why is it still classified as a ketone if it's not actually one?
 * "However, more research must be done"- opinion statement, should not be in an encyclopedia article. Maybe say something like "Research on xyz is lacking...""

Peer Reviiiew

 * Add blue links!


 * Review the guidelines for chemicals or chemical groups, just in case.


 * I feel like you should have a section on naming conventions, if there are any


 * Populate the "see also" section. I am sure you are already going to do this, but w/e


 * You could probably pare down your word use a little, i.e. "physiological conditions" instead of "regular physiological conditions" etc.

Elcquid (talk) 17:11, 30 March 2018 (UTC)