User talk:JPH2002/Immunodeficiency

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This section explains the challenges associated with diagnosing immune deficiencies well, making mention of the delays in diagnosis and subsequent patient morbidity. It clearly outlines infections that can be associated with deficiencies, for example, candida and Lyme disease. It would be nice to see a little more information on the specific kinds of immunodeficiency disorders so that the readers could get a better understanding of what people with this disorder may be facing.

The tone is neutral and the passage delivers all the necessary information without creating too much apparent bias. You could potentially improve the article by providing a specific example or maybe a case study that demonstrates just how diverse immunodeficiency can be.

I think the passage you have written has a really good logical flow and provides a really good explanation of diagnosis in immunodeficiency.

Really cool addition to the article. 137.142.181.127 (talk) 04:02, 22 April 2024 (UTC)