User talk:JRammy/sandbox

Assignment 1
For this assignment, you need to choose an article in need of copyediting (editing for grammar and clarity). Your chosen article on CrosFit would be better suited for Assignment 2. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:38, 7 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Assignment 1 - Received Your Feedback
 * Noted. I will re-submit the article as part of the second assignment and will select a new article for assignment number one.  Thank you.
 * JRammy (talk) 02:58, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
 * You have my approval for both assignments. Josef Horáček (talk) 03:31, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 2
Your sources look good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Josefhoracek (talk • contribs) 17:51, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 3
Your analysis is accurate, and your lead looks promising. Two comments: one, the first sentence of the lead should include a definition; two, if you quote directly from the OpenSSH website, it will sound like an advertisement. You can fix both problems with one step: take the quotation, paraphrase or summarize it, and use it as your first sentence. And if you can back the information with a non-affiliated source, even better. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:45, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Fantastic work. I hope this was a useful experience. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:06, 10 March 2015 (UTC)