User talk:JSUWM/sandbox

This is where the peer review feedback for JSUWM's sandbox draft content should be posted. Be sure to sign your post and complete the Canvas quiz to receive credit for your work. UWM.AP.Endo (talk) 03:53, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Jamie's Review
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes the content is neutral and unbiased. Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? No, they are both primary sources. Because this is related to medicine, MEDRS prefers secondary sources. Since the first study had 469,688 participants, however, it can be used. Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? You could elaborate more on the Hormones that influence blood glucose level (in the table). For example, you can discuss more of the molecular biology behind each.

Jamiepatel1 1601, 19 November 2020

Kelsey Rice peer review
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone?

yes

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines?

No- I noticed that both of your articles are primary articles. Per the MEDRS guidelines, primary sources are generally not supposed to be used for medical content and secondary sources are the preferred source to use when contributing content to an article in Wikipedia.

Are the citations formatted correctly?

yes

Visit the main article that your classmate is contributing their new content to.

Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article?

Yes

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to?

I think your contributions are good but another area you could potentially contribute to is other diseases or situations, aside from Type 1 or Type 2 Diabetes, where it is important to regulate blood sugar levels

Kmr0077 (talk) 23:40, 22 November 2020 (UTC)