User talk:JShaw2003

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Peer review from Section 109
- Overall, excellent work and good progress is being made.

-The content is well written; no major grammatical or spelling changes.

-Good idea for the image.

-Sections are well constructed and organized.

-May want to review the references; they seem to be out of order.

-Once your scheme is in, you may want to explain the reaction stepwise whilst referring to the scheme.

-The chemical properties section and health risks section have sentences that aren't directly related right beside each other. I think that might be fine for a wikipedia article, but it may be something to consider.

KTCpscChem (talk) 17:50, 8 November 2023 (UTC)