User talk:J Gantz22/sandbox

Well written paragraph in good language that is easy to understand in the career section. The article is lacking a lead in of some sort and FIS should be linked or explained for all readers who aren't aware.Emanp1234 (talk) 18:43, 26 October 2018 (UTC)

I find this to be very well written in a simple language. Some of the words others may not know you should add the link to their individual wiki pages for their meaning/information. 21bop (talk) 18:47, 26 October 2018 (UTC)