User talk:J Greb/Pasteup

War Machine from here, 2010-12-07

Items of change:
 * Infobox
 * Layout cleanup of the template
 * Avoid the template redirect
 * Replace caption with
 * Remove "(as Rhodes)" as redundant
 * middle name
 * Remove non-super hero teams and non-fictional groups
 * Remove teams the character wasn't a member of
 * Simplify millitary trainng comment
 * Remove "Mach 3" - nigh impossible to attribute precise valuse to fictional equipment or abilities.
 * convert to character and title
 * Lead
 * Remove "Rupert" as not part of either common name for the character. Not a bio of a real person, so improper for the lead.
 * "comic book superhero" is redundant in the over all lead. Simplify to "superhero" (also questionable)
 * Clarify credits as per and
 * Remove the "Rhodey" aside
 * Simplify down the IoM paragraph of the lead. This can be expanded in a paragraph in the IoM section or merging the IoM article back in.
 * Expand 2 paragraph to includ rough comic book usage
 * Publication history
 * Expand for real world context of the flow of the character.
 * Place the refs in
 * Origins
 * Middle name and place of birth removed as irrelvent, or extreamly trivial at best, with in the works of fiction.
 * Copy edit to put into the "ever present now" and remove unneeded detailes.
 * Round out cite

current

 * The all new Iron Man