User talk:J dotter/Fixation (histology)

I looked over your article draft, and my main concern is that it doesn't look like you've added much to it. As far as I can tell, 'Heat fixation' and 'Immersion' were not changed as well. I like the added detail on 'Perfusion' and the additional sources! You might want to get more added to it though. Also have you thought of what figure you're going to add yet? There's no figure yet on the article so I'm sure it will be easy. One idea I had, looking over the original article, is that you could expand on the "Process" section, as it's not well developed as is. You could even transfer some of the information on perfusion to the "Process" section, so that in "Types" perfusion is defined, but how it's done is explained in "Process". Dinoboy10 (talk) 05:11, 2 December 2021 (UTC)

It doesn't look like much has been changed since I last looked over what you had. It looks like you have plenty of good sources, so hopefully you an use those to expand even more on what you've already written! I know today is technically the last day for peer reviews as far as grading the peer reviews goes, but I'm happy to look over it tomorrow or the next day if you're able to add more material to see how it's going. Dinoboy10 (talk) 06:50, 10 December 2021 (UTC)