User talk:JaCee.D.Aaseth/sandbox

Review by Jafrah Erfle

1. Make sure the into parts are all capitolized. Ex. Transnational relations of India, Transnational cultures in media and gender) 2. If you could get birthday, add birthdate. 3. I would add where she currently works in the intro not waiting until history section 4. capitalize title in her scholarly work ex. Transnational Cultures 5. Good listings of articles!

Good job! let me know if you have any questions!

Katelyn Czichotzki's Edits

- I like the intro paragraph before the History and Background! - PhD*? - Make sure to capitalize major headings aka Journal *Editor - Nice further readings! I like the organization. - You did a good job with the flow of the paragraphs and making it like you're telling a story. - Did you find a birth place by chance?? - Very well done, JaCee! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Katelynczi (talk • contribs) 02:13, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Edits are VERY kind, but not super helpful! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aburnett412 (talk • contribs) 01:54, 26 April 2017 (UTC)