User talk:JackCurnow

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Match notes on 2015 Melbourne Football Club season
Hi, thanks for your edit on the 2015 Melbourne Football Club season page, I just noticed that a lot of it was written like it was a newspaper article, with a lot of colloquial and slang, it's better to focus on facts rather than editorialising on Wikipedia. Seeing Manual of Style, WP:NPOV, and WP:Tone should be able to help you as you get used to Wikipedia. I reworded it a bit, but season pages do have a bit more leeway than other pages due to the nature of the page, so even I'm not as strict and precise with my own editing on season pages compared with others. Once again, thanks for your edit and feel free to write more match notes for the Melbourne season pages if you want to :) Flickerd (talk) 09:23, 5 August 2015 (UTC)