User talk:Jack Zagorski

Your submission
At Articles for creation: Mana (meal replacement) (December 13)  Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Mana (meal replacement) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 14:59, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

AfC notification: User:Jack Zagorski/Mana (food) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Jack Zagorski/Mana (food). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 15:00, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Mana (meal replacement) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Mana (meal replacement). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 15:01, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

Editing with a conflict of interest
Hello, Jack Zagorski. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:


 * avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization or competitors;
 * propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (you can use the request edit template);
 * disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see Conflict of interest);
 * avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see WP:Spam);
 * do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Ian.thomson (talk) 09:01, 16 December 2019 (UTC)

You need to properly disclose your financial interest on your user page
Hello Jack Zagorski. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially egregious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat SEO.

Paid advocates are very strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists, and if it does not, from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are  required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:Jack Zagorski. The template Paid can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form:. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. Ian.thomson (talk) 09:01, 16 December 2019 (UTC)


 * I moved your COI declarations from your Talk page to your User page. If your relationship is actually paid, then these should be changed to the Paid template Ian.thomson provided. David notMD (talk) 11:16, 16 December 2019 (UTC)

I am not sure what happened, but I clearly stated my paid-editing COI after a close study of the instructions for doing so. Maybe the COI I gave concerned only one of the drafts I created (apparently, I accidentally created 2 drafts, thinking that I was overwriting the first by creating the second). In any case, here it is again:.

I don't plan on editing again until I believe I can meet the criteria stated to me, but will this suffice to clear the air for now?
 * Moved to your User page. David notMD (talk) 13:41, 16 December 2019 (UTC)

If you decide to delete/abandon the draft, you can remove that stuff from your User page David notMD (talk) 23:00, 16 December 2019 (UTC)

Draft:Mana (meal replacement) concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Mana (meal replacement), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:29, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Mana (meal replacement)


Hello, Jack Zagorski. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Mana".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 15:37, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mana (meal replacement) (July 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bilorv was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Mana (meal replacement) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Mana (meal replacement), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Mana_(meal_replacement) Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Bilorv&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Mana_(meal_replacement) reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

— Bilorv ( talk ) 15:50, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Mana (meal replacement)


Hello, Jack Zagorski. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Mana".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 17:20, 18 January 2022 (UTC)