User talk:Jack suharto

Your edits to socially responsible investing
While the content is basically sound, you've got two problems, one major and one minor. The minor one? We discourage the use of TLAs (Three-Letter Acronyms) in articles. The major one? You start with a footnote, rather than naming the researcher(s) and then putting the footnote at the end of the sentence or passage. You need to say, "Fred Breffle of the University of Southern North Dakota at Hoople concluded that investments in liquor stocks led to more fun shareholder meetings" THEN put in the footnote, which latter displays at the end of the article with our other citations. Okay? -- Orange Mike &#124;  Talk  20:11, 9 February 2019 (UTC)