User talk:Jackhutton1/sandbox

IJB043 Peer Review
Pelecanidae Paragraph

- perhaps change the wording from stating the duration is unknown to stating the duration varies, implying it is known, just that it depends on the species being studied. Remainder of paragraph is neutral and well written.

Spheniscidae Paragraph

- Add a semicolon to first sentence "Penguin courtship consists of both auditory and visual displays; however, their presentation varies by species.". Perhaps divide the paragraph into three smaller to represent the Ecstatic, Mutual Ecstatic, and Bowing courtship behaviours. Remaining information is well written and to the point.

Phalacrocoracidae

- "After copulation, the pair performs several pair strengthening and recognition behaviours with intermittent departures by the male to retrieve food and nesting resources." remove comma from "After copulation" remainder is neutral and concise

IJB043 (talk) 23:37, 7 November 2018 (UTC)