User talk:Jackieelsokkary

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Hello, Jackieelsokkary, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Julie's peer review
- Do the group’s edits substantially improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review “Guiding framework”? Yes, it has a clear and balanced structure and consistently cites reliable sources. The edits were written in a neutral way that followed the original format of the article but still added more information on the topic. - Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement? Yes, they added more information on the different techniques used in artificial insemination and added pregnancy rates for the ICI and IUI methods. - Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? Yes, it is written in a neutral tone with no personal conclusions drawn. Awesome job Group 1B! Juliechaeoon (talk) 06:42, 6 August 2019 (UTC)