User talk:Jackmckim/Growth capital

Hi Jack, the sections you propose adding to the Growth capital article are apt and in their current draft form are well sourced and focused. In your revision, you might consider tightening up the paragraphs a bit (through refining your topic sentences) and incorporating internal links to other Wikipedia articles to key terms and phrases that already have articles. Overall though, this draft offers a clear plan for how you intend to proceed with the project--good work! Amyc29 (talk) 16:38, 28 July 2020 (UTC)