User talk:Jackw8738/Fate/Grand Order/Keyiqiu Peer Review

1. It can be seen from this article that shen has a very professional understanding and views on this content, and he has an expert knowledge of this article

2. This article is not quoted, some places need external links to prove the point. And more views are needed in different parts

3. I need to make my articles more professional and have a deeper understanding of the wiki I have chosen