User talk:Jacob defay/sandbox

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gender_pay_gap In the gender pay gap article, there is no section on the wage gap as it pertains to public educators. I was thinking of researching on the wage gap as it specifically applies to teachers, which is something I could add to the article.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Residential_segregation_in_the_United_States In the residential segregation article, there is no information on the current state of residential segregation in Atlanta, GA. This is something I could add to the article.

KJ Peer Review
I appreciate how informative, neutral, and quantitatively supported your wikipedia contribution is. The message is clear-cut and the headings were direct. In the first paragraph, however, your use of the words "urban" and "suburban" tend to repeat a lot which may lose the reader in your explanation. If you can find alternative to substitute one or two "urban"s it would benefit the article. KaitlynJ (talk) 03:15, 19 April 2018 (UTC)KaitlyynJ