User talk:Jacobfunck/sandbox

Sydney's peer review
I think your Local Tax Enabling Act section is really well written! You give a general overview of the act as well as some extra interesting information towards the end of the paragraph. The only thing in this section that I would change is in your last sentence I think you meant to say “they favor wealthy people over the poor.”

I would look over spelling in the Governor Casey section. I think it would also be useful to mention why the voters shut down the commission’s idea.

I also think your last two sections clearly outline the purpose of the two bills, but maybe adding in some more information about them and their effects might be interesting information to have.

Overall I think your article is very clear and to the point. I would just look over spelling and the few things I mentioned and adding a little more information in certain places!!