User talk:Jacobgpx/sandbox

Christian Stowe
This article has credible scholarly sources that offer valuable information that is not included in the Wikipedia article. Utilizing these sources correctly can make the article more accurate.

Peer Review Response Jacob Powell
Thanks Christian, I hope I've made to appropriate changes to better use the sources. Jacobgpx (talk) 16:08, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review - Emma Smith
The sources you used seem to be properly cited and you have a clear idea of what you want to contribute to the article. My only concern is in your final sentence when I believe you put an extra "it" in the sentence. Keep up the good work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emmasmith9185 (talk • contribs) 15:39, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response Jacob Powell
Hi Emma, I changed it, thank you! Jacobgpx (talk) 16:08, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi thanks

Peer Review
Your source has interesting information, but it also has incomplete sentences. Great job, just be careful on your sentence structures! Ancrai6004 (talk) 15:41, 22 October 2018 (UTC) Anna Crain

Peer Review Response Jacob Powell
Thanks, I changed it, I know I normally mess those up haha. Jacobgpx (talk) 16:08, 5 December 2018 (UTC)