User talk:Jacobmiceli

Foreign Language Bookshop
The article is still essay like and is unreferenced. I suggest you fix the issues rather than remove the tags. If the article is not referenced, it will be placed in the deletion list. Thanks...

ttonyb1 (talk) 05:41, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Further
Hi Tony I have cleaned up the article and added references and a more encyclopaedic format. Is this OK now? I know you're busy, any assistance you could give would be much appreciated as I am still learning. Regards Jacob
 * I think it looks much better; however, there is no guarantee that another editor will not have some further suggestions. I would also suggest you point the references to the appropriate website.  You can search in help for how to do this or you can go to another article and follow the example of how to reference a site.  Good luck... ttonyb1 (talk) 07:03, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Take a look at the website section in http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citation_templates. ttonyb1 (talk) 07:13, 11 December 2008 (UTC)