User talk:Jacquesdav

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Immervision (August 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Otterathome was:

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Otterathome (talk) 18:27, 10 August 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Immervision (September 19)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  19:47, 19 September 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Immervision (October 27)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Narutolovehinata5 was:

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Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:56, 27 October 2017 (UTC)

Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not intended to be a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you. SwisterTwister  talk  17:07, 1 November 2017 (UTC)

promotional content
Hi, I noticed your question about promotional content at the teahouse and I believe there's a mis-understanding here. In the draft article it is mentioned four times that your citations don't show notability. The word "promotional" does not appear there, that only mysteriously shows up on this talk page?? Which doesn't count against your draft. I like it, well done and good luck with it! Dougmcdonell (talk) 07:56, 5 November 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Doug... still waiting for a response from the Wikipedia editors.


 * Looking back in, I see it may help if I can explain. So the current article qualifies for any removal or objection to said article by our WP:Deletion policy since it's highly resembling of a sales pitch, not to your standards. SwisterTwister   talk  15:09, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

Hi SwisterTwister   talk : Thanks for the clarification. However might I ask you to printout those sections/paragraphs/passages or even specific word use that gives the impression of it being a sales pitch or not as neutral as it might otherwise be? The issue of tone & style were not at any time brought into question before your comment, so the sudden appearance of this as a comment left me puzzled. I've read the WP:Deletion policy through carefully the Wikipedia Spam page and am not sure which words give it the appearance of being biased. Any insight as to specific content in my article that creates this impression would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
 * Looking in, I now saw your comment. Here with articles, we're highly skeptical of including anything when it involves business offers and details like that about the business as it would suggest an business profile or listing, and so the best place for this would be the company website or their social medias, etc. SwisterTwister   talk  13:36, 22 November 2017 (UTC)