User talk:Jad Mada/Hinduism in India/Dilrajg2004 Peer Review

Update the census. Elaborate on Hindu history and culture rather than demographics
The Census stated in the first sentence of the article needs to be updated to the 2020 United States census, as it would effect the rest of the statistics stated in the article. Although the article does mention the Partition of India and how it effected Hindus, it overlooks the interaction between Hindus and people of other religions. There are many great sources that provide specific information relevant to the topic, however they should be updated to include the modern census and the Hindu dominated Indian Congress. Hindu oppression is very briefly discussed and left out of the history section. Events such as the Exodus of Kashmiri Hindus is overlooked in many articles. Since majority of the Indian Congress is Hindu, it would be ideal to include influential figures who were also Hindu. On the other hand, the article does an excellent job providing visuals of Hindu temples to indicate that Hinduism is widely available. Lastly, the article is very statistic focused and would benefit from providing context for those numbers and immersing the reader into the culture of Hinduism in India. This can be done by talking or linking traditions and mentioning the huge religious markets in India. Dilrajg2004 (talk) 23:31, 26 November 2022 (UTC)