User talk:Jada Simon/sandbox

Hey guys! I'm guessing this is where we have our discussion? If anyone has edited/added anything, please post the details here so we can all keep track :) Cseusankar (talk) 05:32, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey guys! I just wanted to make sure we all know how to use the sandbox because it's still not clear who's doing what. So basically, after clicking the link beside Spokesperson & Designated Sandbox, you click the 'Talk' tab and simply type out your message. At the end of your message, be sure to insert this symbol --> ~ <-- 4 times so we can identify who's saying what. So that's ~ ~ ~ ~ but without the spaces. I hope this helps :) Cseusankar (talk) 06:11, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

So, I realized that this article has a lot of statistics about divorce but does not thoroughly explain how it effects family life. I've decided to add a section for divorce. This section will roughly explain of the reasons for divorce and the effects that it may have on children. Cseusankar (talk) 17:50, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Chenelle, I see your messages but if you click on the user page thats where im editing the section im going to add and you can put the paragraph you want me to add to the article there which will be added when everything is completed and ready to be print screened (a pic of the actual wiki article) Let me confirm which part of the sandbox I should be using because now Im not sure, i never used this section of the sandbox. Jada Simon (talk) 18:05, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure who is supposed to do the cover page, so I've taken the liberty to do so myself. I need the student # of each group member, so please e-mail those to me. Let me know if someone else has already done it. Also, we still have 2 group members who seem to be missing an account on wikipedia. Can someone please get a hold of them and help them go about making one. Cseusankar (talk) 18:19, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey Jada, I've seen the other groups use this one for their discussion and the user page to post their edits. I'm almost done the divorce section, so I'll post it on the user page once I'm done. Cseusankar (talk) 18:20, 28 March 2012 (UTC) Oh ok thank you for telling me that.. But in terms of the cover page I need everyone to email me their student number because I'm the one submitting the emailed package to the TA. So you can text me your student number and ill the rest to do the same. Jada Simon (talk) 22:32, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Message for Group Members: Hey Ladies ! Remember you are being marked on your contributions to the article which is confirmed through conversation on THIS TALK BOX! Jada Simon (talk) -- Hey that sounds good tonight we'll help you edit this article... Aisha Bajwa (talk)

Ok great :) (Aisha). Yes, so I need everyone to text me their student # and the sections they want to be added to the article needs to be added to the user page of the talk box as soon as possible. This is to ensure we have enough time edit and insert appropriate html codes and get the best mark possible :) So Chenelle the section that you wanted to add just add it to the user page. I will text the other girls and tell them to come participate in the conversation on wikipedia Jada Simon (talk) 22:43, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey guys, I just posted the Divorce section on the user page..but the format is kind of messed up, I don't know why. So Jada, I'm going to e-mail it to you. Cseusankar (talk) 05:42, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

e are adding this section under science of parenting right? ill copy and past it in now? and also include the citation

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This is so weird, I had posted something before, now it's not there anymore. Yes, Lola it goes under science of parenting. User:Bajwaai1

This is where I moved all the conversation to keep things separate so we all talk on here. But I dont have the Soc book I forgot to write down the info so if any one has one can they please write down the citation on here and tell me what are the page numbers that the "Alternative family Forms" fall on Jada Simon (talk) 13:19, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Oh yes and everyone needs to write something on their user page so it is active and available. The TA told us to write something about ourselves on there Jada Simon (talk) 13:22, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Yes the section I wrote will go under the science of parenting and Chenelles section will go under the Sociology of marriage Jada Simon (talk) 13:43, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

HELLO LADIES!! I would like to submit the assignment before 12:45 pm, So I am kindly asking everyone to complete all the necessary edits, text and code (etc) to the user page of the sandbox so I can submit the final copy of our section to the ACTUAL WIKIPEDIA PAGE. Please make all substantial edits as soon as possible so we can complete the assignment. Thanks for everyone's help and contributions to the assignment! Jada Simon (talk) 15:51, 29 March 2012 (UTC) Macionis, J. J., & Gerber, L. M. (2011). Sociology, seventh Canadian edition. Toronto, Ontraio: Pearson.

Hey, here's the citation. But, I'm confused about the seventh Canadian edition part, I'm not too sure if it's part of the title or not...

does the following sentence sound odd? To me it sounds like a run on sentence. what do you think? The sociology of the family examines the family, as an institution and a unit of socialization, through various sociological perspectives, particularly with regard to the relationship between the nuclear family and industrial capitalism, and the distinct gender roles and concepts of childhood which arose with it. User:Bajwaai1

Yes thats what I stated earlier that I dont really like the first sentence but I think you can change it if you want but so far we edited 2 specific sections so Im not sure if its relevant. And Chenelle we still need your sources and citations in order for your section to be included in the article !! Jada Simon (talk) 16:08, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Hey, here's my citation. And I'll add the in-text citation on the User Page. Macionis, J. J. & Gerber L. M. (2011) Sociology (7th ed.). Toronto, ON: Pearson. Cseusankar (talk) 16:28, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

I think it should sounds like this...

The sociology of the family examines the family as an institution and a unit of socialization. This unit of socialization is identified through various sociological perspectives; particularly with regards to the relationship between the nuclear family and industrial capitalism, and the different gender roles and concepts of childhood which also arose with it. What do you guys think? Bajwaai1 (talk) 16:29, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Okay I just added the reference on the user page. Is there anything else we need to do? And Aisha, that sounds better. I think the 'also' in the last sentence should be removed because it sounds a bit unnecessary. Other than that, it sounds a lot better than the original. Cseusankar (talk) 16:47, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

I'm thinking that we can each edited a few section, which would be faster... I'm editing the 1st 3, so until Methodology. and I was thinking someone else can do Sociology of interracial intimacy, Sociology of marriage, and Sociology of motherhood. and another person can do Sociology of fatherhood, Sociology of childhood, Socialization and Statistics on American families... Bajwaai1 (talk) 16:50, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

I dont think it really makes sense to go ahead and edit the entire article, especially at this stage in the game.. I re-edited the section I already posted on the actual wiki page (please let me now of any changes that have not been made prior to) so let me know Chenelle when your ready for me to post yours and Ill go ahead and hand in the article.. Aisha did you add that first part to the main page already and is it on the user page of the sand box? Everyone needs to put any section they added or need to be added to the ACTUAL WIKI PAGE on the USERPAGE of the SANDBOX because I am not emailing the entire article, only the changes we have substantially made.. Jada Simon (talk) 17:02, 29 March 2012 (UTC)

Alright Ladies this is the final step, I have included the main sections Chenelle, Aisha and I have made to the word document(and main article), which will be submitted to the TA everything will be emailed shortly and we can finally RELAX!! (I will text everyone once everything is finalized) Great job everyone and have an awesome summer! --Jada Simon (talk) 17:19, 29 March 2012 (UTC)