User talk:Jadeizaguirre/sandbox

Small Grammatical Error
Under Chemical Shift, should the phrase "9F NMR is about 0.83 times sensitive compared to 1H NMR." be instead "9F NMR is about 0.83 times more sensitive compared to 1H NMR." or "9F NMR is about 0.83 times as sensitive compared to 1H NMR"

Sextonb (talk) 06:56, 21 March 2018 (UTC)Ben

Possible Further Background
Consider adding a link to another page in the phrase "It is also possible to record decoupled 19F{1H} and 1H{19F} spectra and multiple bond correlations 19F-13C HMBC and through space HOESY spectra" so that readers can learn more about this subject

Sextonb (talk) 06:58, 21 March 2018 (UTC)Ben

Peer Review
The breadth of information included in the article is generally very good. The tables of common chemical shifts was a particularly useful touch. In particular, the coupling section is very well done. There are some dispersed grammatical errors, such as the lack of a semi-colon after (1H NMR) in the lead paragraph. Also, in the last paragraph, I believe the word "germinal" may have been used in place of the word "geminal." The weakest part of the article is the Applications section, which could be substantially fleshed out. You make note of the use of fluorine NMR in biological labeling in your lead paragraph, but this gets no further mention in the applications paragraph. On the whole, the article is well done. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Henry DeGroot (talk • contribs) 15:52, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

Shielding Effects
You mention the relative effects of paramagnetic and diamagnetic shielding on the chemical shifts of fluorine nuclei. Some more information on this topic would be useful (some explanation of the effects and how they affect chemical shifts. Alternatively, a link to the chemical shift wikipedia page would work, although that article could also probably use some peer review. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Henry DeGroot (talk • contribs) 16:10, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

Tables
I would also recommend centering the text on your tables and possibly using a bold text so it is a little bit easier to read.

Denevedr (talk) 11:01, 21 March 2018 (UTC)Daniel