User talk:Jadejjjade/Lychee wine

Pre-move Review
Hello, I looked over your article history and see that you've done quite a bit to improve the article!

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Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you for becoming a Wikipedia contributor! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 08:01, 14 February 2020 (UTC)