User talk:Jademclean

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Hello, Jademclean, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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You have an overdue training assignment.
Please complete the assigned training modules. --Burnscheadle (talk) 17:23, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Feedback
Nice start, but you need to think about a few things before moving your work to mainspace
 * If you're going to write about impacts on indigenous groups, you need to write from a more global perspective. Why Canada and not Venezuela - where the indigenous groups probably have fewer rights and legal protections. If you are only writing about Canada, then maybe the main oil sands article isn't the best place to add this - maybe the Athabasca oil sands article, or another article.
 * References should appear immediately after the statements they support. There should be a minimum of one reference per paragraph, and there shouldn’t be any text after the last reference in a paragraph.
 * References go after punctuation, not before. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:36, 20 April 2018 (UTC)