User talk:JadenGordon1/sandbox

JadenGordon1 Peer review by Hunni22

I can see that your article is short yet very interesting. I like the paragraph that you’re adding, it has many important facts that fall into the population change. I would say that if you can separate the Tempo effect paragraph from the first paragraph and expand on both of them. Also, at the bottom of the paragraph, if you can research further on how did the question of “are you a citizen” has influenced the Census Bureau either positively or negatively. Overall, very reliable resources and well done additions. I didn’t see any errors or spellings mistakes. Hunni22 (talk) 14:09, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review from Ben Dewhurst
I think you have good ideas for contributing to the article. The only suggestion I have is to rearrange the sections of the article so that as a whole the article is easier to follow. For instance, the section Growth by Country contains a pretty big chart that people have to scroll through before seeing the other sections at the bottom. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bdewhurst17 (talk • contribs) 04:30, 3 April 2018 (UTC)