User talk:JadenMcElvey

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Hello, JadenMcElvey, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Alex's peer review
Lead: The topic is covered. It includes what field she worked in as well as when she lived and worked in this field including her important works. It gives the most important information from the rest of the page.

Structure: The structure is clear. There are heading and subheading in the larger sections of the article. Different stages of her life in the biography section are clearly separated for example.

Balance: The article is written in a neutral tone. No point of view is imposed onto the reader and it seems that nothing controversial is excluded from the article. No conclusions are drawn from the article. The section about her university life seems longer than the one about her work so more should be added to that section as it is supposed to be the most important one according to the lead.

Neutral content: The content is neutral. I do not know the perspective of the author by reading the article No descriptive words such as "the best" or "the worst" are used in this article to give the authors view of the subject.

Reliable sources: All the statements in the article are linked to one of the sources. It is mostly separated between the variable sources. There is no information without a source.

Asikorsky (talk) 18:03, 11 July 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Marlene Hazle has been accepted
 Marlene Hazle, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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