User talk:Jaf020/Lumber River/L.holmie Peer Review

1.This article did a great job of breaking down the information into sections that are easy to skim through 2. An edit I would suggest making is to add the little in text citations to more of the statements within the table with all of the information about the River. 3. I think the most important edit would be to make a lead section right at the top before the table with all of the information about the Lumber River. 4. I really liked the way the information was broken down into segments. It was easy to read through, or to scroll to parts you are interested in.