User talk:Jagani.ayman/new sandbox

1)What does the article (or section) do well? This article does a great job in spliting the Wikipedia page into sections where their background section, early life, acting career, discography, and awards and accolades section. The article does a good job in making the Wikipedia page simple to read by any target audience. Hyperlinks are used to connect reader with other pages when the reader does not understand a work, concept, place, etc. Tables are used when discussing discography, making it more appealing for reader to follow. 2) What changes would you suggest overall? I would suggest adding photos to make it more appealing to the reader I would suggest adding a section about "family life" and a deeper analyis of Troyman's albums. I would also suggest providing his full name in the Wikipedia page

3)What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Add deeper analysis about the different albumns the rapper did and their meanings. 4)Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!''' Making the Wikpeida page clear and concise when getting a point across. Great work overall!

Best regards,

Youssef Hammam