User talk:Jah246/sandbox

PEER REVIEW

Earning a Drivers License in California:

This section is direct and unbiased. Adding a citation or two from the CA DMV will add legitimacy and direct readers to the a source for further reading. You might also want to split into two sections, "Under 18 years of age" and "Over 18 years of age", since the requirements will vary slightly between the two.

Meaning of Traffic Signs in the U.S.:

A good summary of the topic. Good references to the FHWA guidelines. Some visual examples in the final version would be nice to help illustrate the different types of signage.

Environmental Impact of driving in the US:

This section has lots of data and could stand to be simplified. The methodology given later in the section should be summarized more simply, and it would make for a better read. Leave the citations for those who would like greater detail. Also made some spelling/grammar corrections.

Good job!

Planning Cities (talk) 04:51, 3 May 2018 (UTC)