User talk:Jake.peebles/sandbox2

6/4/2019 Evaluation by DrMichaelWright
DrMichaelWright (talk) 00:19, 5 June 2019 (UTC)

This is a really interesting topic. I'll be driving through Copenhagen next month, and this has really made me want to visit it. :-) Should I bring a copy of Very Jones' poetry with me?
 * Points: 31/40
 * Grade: 77.5%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard.
 * DDK = dkk, Danish krona.

Language
Nearly meets standard.
 * The language sounds like that of a tourist pamphlet, rather than an encyclopedia entry.
 * Also, the paraphrasing should be further removed from the original. You should use more of your own words. If you are going to use the original words, you should use quotation marks. However, you would only do that in order to showcase something specific about the original wording.
 * Original: "The story of Christiania began in 1971 when a group of people squatted in an old military area in Christianshavn, near the city centre of Copenhagen."
 * Your version:"It all started back in 1971 when a group of people squatted in an old military area in Copenhagen."
 * "Walking through Christiania you will see architecture" Do not use the second person, 'you'. Also, this is not a tourist pamphlet.

Organization
Meets standard.

Coding
Nearly meets standard. Since there is already a Wikipedia article for this part of Copenhagen (Freetown Christiania), it would be a great thing for this addition to the city's article to have placed just under the header. There are two code errors in the references. Providing just the year should fix those.

Validity
Standard?? For the rest, since so many of your sources are irrelevant to the text you write, there's no way for me to see if your text is accurate or not, so I will assume that it is not.
 * Where you mention the average income of residents, it is useful to mention the year, since both changes in incomes and inflation will possibly alter the accuracy of the statement. This even when the source is up to date.

Completion
Meets standard.

Relevance
Meets standard.