User talk:JakeSturg/sandbox

I have found two dead links on Keiko Ozato's page. 

Peer Review by Amsmiley16 (talk) 17:57, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
I think adding the section about Ozato's personal life will be really good at bringing context to her story, especially since the article lacks a lot of biographical content. Putting the connection of her dad and tuberculosis into her research is a key part. I also agree that citation #6 is a dead link in the main page, so I think you should remove it. All of the links you have in your sandbox work and look like they have some valuable information in them. When explaining some of the ideas in easier terms, I would make sure you explain epigenetic memory. This seems to be bigger part of her research and could confuse a lot of people as to what it is. Since in the article it talks about her husband being a "scientific ally," you might could include a link to his page if he has one or just say who it is. Overall, I think the ideas you have about additions are good ones and are things that need to be added.