User talk:Jakeajg7

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May 2024
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Concert etiquette article
I've noticed your edits on the concert etiquette article and while I found them to be in good faith, this is not the correct tone for an encyclopedic article. Despite your addition of references, you hijacked the writing style and made it out more like a user guide for parents, for lack of a better descriptor. I even thought initially that the article has had this tone since what, 2007?

This is not to undermine your efforts in adding sources and information, but please get a good idea of what Wikipedia articles should look like and how they should be written. Thanks. Carlinal (talk) 20:36, 11 May 2024 (UTC)