User talk:Jakewhite1313/sandbox

Good job with focusing on the key points we went over in the training and sticking with the Wikipedia guidelines as you ease into adding to the article. The development of your citing sources portion is decently thorough for what you have so far and everything remains neutral as well. There are definitely sections in the original article that could use some extra information, some sections are only a sentence long. So if you could find more sources to help develop the article even more thoroughly that would be an awesome contribution. Overall, good start! Samsamgal96 (talk) 06:38, 4 November 2018 (UTC)